Stick insect lessons

just bark today
look really close
this bread knife being


notchy serrations
fissures persisting
bent lines of sightings

cry for the butterfly
all dewy beauty
one day’s flutter

yesterday a crease
hardwood ungrowing
in veranda surroundings

breathing a quietude
not always visible
but here ever present

Stick insect Genevieve Brayley Field Naturalists Victoria

4 thoughts on “Stick insect lessons

  1. Love the tone of this one, Jim – the last three lines make for a fine rounding off. I think many of my favourite JW poems are those where the words are given a particular verse paragraph/stanza structure, incidentally.

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